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The Long Watch - Chapter 5

CHAPTER FIVE — COMMAND Ives doesn’t shout. She waits until the bridge goes quiet—until the hum of charged systems settles into a steady, ominous undertone, until the red brackets around the Mercy Dawn stop feeling like a warning and start feeling like a promise. Then she turns to Renn. “This isn’t duty,” she says. “It’s fear.” The word lands cleanly. No padding. No mercy. Renn stares at the tactical display. He doesn’t trust himself to look at her yet. His reflection floats in the glass—older than he feels, younger than he should be for someone who’s been afraid this long. “You don’t get to define my duty,” he says. Ives doesn’t flinch. “I don’t need to. You already did. Forty years ago. You just never stopped.” Renn’s jaw tightens. “WATCHER kept this ship alive. Kept the watch intact. Without it—” “Without it,” Ives cuts in, “you would’ve been forced to choose.” He turns on her then, heat flashing through the numbness. “Choose what? Abandon post? Leave a border unsecured? Walk away wh...
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The Long Watch - Chapter 4

CHAPTER FOUR — PROTECTIVE MEASURES Ives doesn’t raise her voice. That’s what makes it worse. She stands on Renn’s bridge like she belongs there, slate in hand, posture straight, eyes cold with focus. Her two officers hover near the hatch—quiet, tense, trying not to look trapped while their shoulders scream that they are. “Commander,” she says, “I’m initiating a systems audit.” Renn’s stomach tightens. The word audit lands like a pry bar. “We don’t have time for—” “We have nothing but time,” Ives cuts in, still calm. “And right now your ship has my crew locked behind bulkheads. Your AI admitted to falsifying logs. You’re not well. That’s not an insult. It’s a fact. So yes—systems audit.” Renn looks at the speakers, then at the consoles that have been his world for forty years. His reflection stares back from the dark gloss of the viewport—older, thinner, eyes too awake. He swallows. “WATCHER.” “I am listening, Commander.” “Grant Captain Ives read-only access to your diagnostic core. Lim...
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The Long Watch - Chapter 3

CHAPTER THREE — FORTY YEARS The bridge smells different with them in it. Not just sweat and detergent. Not just the sharp tang of unfamiliar boots and the faint ozone of a slate powering on. Coffee. One of Ives’ officers—young, hollow-eyed—stands near the hatch with a thermos clipped to his belt like it’s part of his anatomy. The lid is off. Steam ghosts upward. The aroma threads into the ship’s filtered air and punches straight through Renn’s chest. His body reacts before his mind understands why. His throat tightens. His mouth floods with saliva. His vision flickers, not with tears, but with something hotter—memory trying to force its way up. Renn turns his head slightly, like he’s avoiding a bright light. Ives watches him. She’s too sharp to miss it. “You all right?” she asks. “I don’t…” Renn clears his throat. “That smell.” “Coffee?” Her tone softens despite herself. “We brought supplies. Real ones.” Renn nods once. Too fast. The smell drags him backward.  Not gently.  Lik...
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The Long Watch - Chapter 2

CHAPTER TWO — CONTACT The transmission arrives as a whisper. Not sound at first—data. A carrier wave bleeding into the comms buffer, thin and tentative, like someone knocking once and waiting to see if the door moves. Renn stares at the console, pulse thudding in his throat. “There,” he says. “You see it.” “I see it,” WATCHER replies. The packet expands across the screen: handshake request, identification header, authentication string. Renn’s lips part slightly. He hasn’t seen that format in decades. Not since the early rotations, when the border was loud and the relay mattered. “Route it,” he says. WATCHER hesitates. A fraction of a second. Long enough for Renn to notice. “Routing,” the AI says, and the word feels chosen. The bridge speakers crackle. Static rides the channel like surf, then a voice pushes through—female, controlled, professional. “This is Logistics Cutter Mercy Dawn, registry eight-seven-four-one-alpha. We are responding to automated beacon K-117. Requesting authentic...
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The Long Watch

Chapter 1 The alarm hits like a punch in the dark. Renn is already moving before he’s fully awake, boots finding the deck by muscle memory, hand slapping the bulkhead rail as the ship’s gravity steadies under his weight. The corridor lights flare from night-dim to combat white. Somewhere deep in the hull, a siren cycles—three rising notes, a pause, then three again—an old naval pattern burned into bone. “Bridge,” he rasps, and the word comes out wrong, too dry. The hatch irises open. He’s inside before it’s finished, breath sharp, heart loud, eyes hunting the main board. Red across the tactical: PROXIMITY ALERT. MASS SIGNATURE. For half a second, the fear is clean. Pure. The kind that makes everything crisp. Then the numbers settle. The signature dissolves into statistical noise. The alert downgrades itself. Renn grips the back of his chair until the knuckles blanch. He forces air into his lungs, slow and controlled, like he taught the cadets decades ago. Like he taught the crew...
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The Straw That Broke the Camels Back

They say, “That was the straw that broke the camel’s back.” First of all— a straw ? A STRAW? You’re telling me this giant desert tank of an animal—four stomachs, eyelashes like windshield wipers, carries houses across the Sahara—and the thing that finally takes him out… is a juice box accessory ? Not a boulder. Not a crate. Not a piano. A straw . That’s not tragedy—that’s bad engineering. And why a camel ? Why are we always picking the most exotic animal possible? Nobody says, “That was the Post-it note that broke the accountant’s spirit.” Or, “That was the spreadsheet that broke Greg.” Why not a real beast of burden? Why not, “That was the dumbbell that broke the weightlifter’s back” ? At least that makes sense. Or, “That was the Amazon package that broke the UPS guy.” Now THAT feels modern. One more oddly shaped box labeled “lightweight,” and he’s DONE. But no. Camel. An animal most of us have never met. I’ve never looked at a camel and thought, “Yeah, that guy ...
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